I think
Calgary is a safe city because until now, nothing has happened to me, and I
haven’t yet heard that a friend or family say, “I've been robbed”; compared to my
hometown, Calgary is safer. I've been robbed twice; the first time was in my former department when I lived only with two friends, thieves broke into the department
and stole four laptops, a PlayStation 3, an LCD screen and roommate’s clothes; some
friends thought that my department was like a warehouse. After the theft, they never
left their belongings again. The second time was in other city; a thief stole my
van’s spare wheel which was located under the van, maybe I need to know and
locate a better spot to park the van.
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| My former department and some things that were stolen |
You have a lot of experience with the crime, I've just been robbed once (was enough for me) and I really felt angry!
ReplyDeleteI felt angry too, but they are just material things
DeleteI'm sorry to see it! so , you should lock the window and door! please look after yourself.
ReplyDeleteI did it, but the thieves broke the door
DeleteUnfortunately, that sort of crime can happen anywhere. My sister and brother-in-law live in a nice neighborhood, but their garage was broken into recently, and a few bicycles were stolen.
ReplyDeleteCorrections:
Vocab - I think you mean to say 'apartment' instead of 'department'.
Also, your grammar is quite accurate, but my advice would be not to use more than one semi-colon in a sentence (use a period instead of a second semi-colon).